Thursday, July 29, 2021

Incorporation Chapter One

Selene groaned, staring up through a circular hole in the ceiling at a starry sky. Cool air swirled throughout the chamber, giving her nude body the chills.

The candles flickering around her didn’t provide much warmth, casting strange shadows on the stone dome far above her head. She had discovered to her detriment that they were hazards. If she tried to move around too much, the candle wax would spill, burning painfully on her skin.


Still, it made her itchy to do nothing. She was a superhero. Action was part of her nature. A calling.


She tugged at her wrists, attached chains clinking gently against the hardwood table. She was bound at her ankles, wrists, and neck, making it impossible for her to get up at all. These weren’t rough restraints; the smoothness of the metal cuffs indicated that they had been machined. Whoever had captured her had been well prepared, and had probably been watching her for a long time.


Clenching her fingers into fists, she forced herself to relax and think logically. Why hadn’t anyone noticed she had gone missing? The last day or so was hazy in her mind, and she didn’t really know when she had been kidnapped, but surely her girlfriend would have noticed her missing at work.


Her lips twisted. She couldn’t rely on the superhero guild. They didn’t consider her a part of their group, even though she paid the dues. Some of that was likely because she wasn’t on friendly terms with some of their members. The Rat Patroller would never forgive her for using some of his rats in her science experiments, but how was she to know that some of the rats in her traps were his?


How could they expect her to live up to her name of Witchbreaker if she couldn’t experiment to figure out the most effective potions to block transference between different dimensions? It was so unfair.


Her calling was even more important given the recent paranormal activity. She could tell something strange was in the air, as she had been forced to banish at least two summoners to prevent them from bringing in demonic entities from a different plane within the last month. There was probably some sort of unique celestial confluence going on that she was unaware of. She hated those.


Breathing hard, she took in the smoky night air. The fear was beginning to dissipate, replaced with boredom. There was nothing to do, and she could only speculate so much. She wanted something to happen, damnit!


“Hello, Witchbreaker,” said a sultry voice behind her bound head. “Or should I say, Selene?”


Crap. Her kidnapper knew her real name. How could that have possibly slipped out? None of the heroes at the guild knew it. Her captor must have supernatural research.


A stone settled in her stomach as two taloned hands wrapped a chain around her neck, a dark, heart shaped amulet settling between her large breasts. The smoky purple hands seized them, squeezing languorously.


Selene gulped, grimacing at the pleasurable sensations her body produced as the sharp talons tweaked her nipples. She was a real painslut, but her captor couldn’t know that. She would have to be careful here - if her secret fetish was exposed, there was no telling what her captor would do to her to make her compliant.


“Mmmmm, no begging for mercy? I like that,” said the woman as she ran a talon up Selene’s neck line.


Selene bit her lip, doing everything she could to avoid reacting. She closed her eyes. She didn’t like this. She didn’t want to be tortured to the edge of her endurance, breaking only when her pussy gaped, waiting for more pleasurable abuse.


It was rather embarrassing, and none of the men she had dated in the past were willing to go that far. It tended to chase them away, leaving her unfulfilled. That was why she had gotten so serious with Aline lately. The woman had a hidden dark side that knew exactly how to treat her, to make her scream in pleasure, superhero or not.


Aline. She needed to hold on for her, if nobody else. This was nothing. She could bear this pleasurable torture.


She opened her eyes, determined to face her captor and demand her freedom. Instead, she gasped at what she saw. Crap.


The woman was a creature straight out of some of her most torrid nightmares. A perfectly proportioned body, built for fucking, nude purple skin highlighted by flames flickering down her thighs with every step. Bony protuberances were attached to her shoulders like armor, covered with spikes. 


Metallic studs twinkled at her nipples, chin, and triangular ears, which stuck out sideways under endless falls of hair, black as night. In the center of it all, two fiery red eyes, slitted like a cat. Filled with lust for her.


Double crap. This time, the summoner wasn’t your run of the mill cultist. This was a true demoness, and there was no way of telling how powerful the outsider had become during her stay on this plane. She must have missed catching another summoner, but where, and when? Her detection spellwork was impeccable!


Her eyes shifted, trying to ignore the demoness’ unnatural beauty. She did have the equipment necessary to banish a demon, but not here. Not with her. Not when she needed it.


She grimaced. She felt so damn aroused. Probably a side effect of being so close to the demoness. Her cuffs tinkled as she tried to move her hands towards her privates involuntarily. She was in real trouble.


The demoness tilted her head, fire dancing in her eyes. “You don’t look like much now, but that’s not a problem. I can fix that. Make you perfect for my needs.” Her forked tongue flickered out, revealing multiple piercings on its split ends.


Selene struggled, her left foot knocking a candle off the table. She groaned, trying to banish the sultry image of the demoness from her mind.


“Careful now,” said the creature, stretching over to reveal the full extent of her luscious breasts. “You wouldn’t want to injure yourself.”


She stroked the unlit candle with a talon, and it flickered back to life. “Putting out a few candles won’t ruin my plans.”


She turned and lifted her well sculpted arms, gesturing at the hole in the ceiling. Her slender tail whisked through the air, dancing in excited patterns. “The blood moon has almost arrived, and with it, the final piece necessary to raise my Master. And you’re the one who’s going to make it possible!”


Selene blinked. The moon certainly wasn’t looking normal. Maybe the demoness wasn’t completely insane. “What if I don’t want to make it possible?” she replied, thinking slowly. “What if I resist, every step of the way?”


The demoness chuckled. “An inconvenience, nothing more - which is why I’ve prepared a contingency.”


Turning swiftly, she seized a pot. Pulling out a paintbrush, she dipped it within. She hummed a dark tune as she worked the brush over Selene’s breasts. The brush’s tip swirled as it licked at her nipples.


Selene wanted to protest, but instead began to laugh in a strained fashion, the bristles tickling her horrendously as the paint blackened her flesh.


The demoness clucked her tongue. “If you stop wiggling, I’ll be done sooner. I wouldn’t have to do this at all if you had decided to be more cooperative.”


Selene didn’t stop wiggling, and the demoness rolled her sparkling eyes, saying nothing. She expertly moved the brush downwards, painting quickly around Selene’s belly button. When the demoness got to her pubes, she ran a talon over Selene’s denuded skin.


“How delightful!” she growled. “One less step for me.”


She finished by touching the point of the paintbrush into Selene’s belly button, grinning wide. “Look at you. Such a scrumptious morsel. Don’t worry, I’m not dragging this out. It won’t be much longer.”


Her taloned hands flexed. “You might find this hard to believe, but I hate waiting as much as you do. There are so many possibilities. You cannot imagine how much effort I’ve expended to ensure this happens without interference.”


She tossed the paintbrush aside, letting it clatter to the stone floor. Tail swishing behind her, she watched Selene hungrily, as if she wanted to pounce on her.


Selene found it strange that she almost wanted the demoness to do so. To take her body and ravage her. She must have been dosed with some kind of aphrodisiac, as that idea was sounding more and more appealing.


Sweat beaded her brow. She was feeling hot. Did it have something to do with the moon? She squinted upwards, confused by what she saw. The usual white glow of the new moon had somehow been altered.


A filter had been placed between it and her, changing its appearance to a dusky red. Before, it was simply another dot of light in the sky, now it was large and centered in the aperture in the ceiling, glowing malevolently.


The demoness began to chant, lifting her hands above Selene’s naked body. Her breasts flexed and her tail lifted up as the strange words infiltrated her ears. She tried to think of something else, but the strange syllables were keeping her focused, her eyes tracing the outline of the moon.


The words faded into a buzz, a constant presence in the back of her mind. She was calm, watching the strange looking moon with curiosity. Relaxed, her thoughts faded, her conscious mind forced into the present. Experiencing, not thinking.


The amulet resting between her breasts suddenly began to glow red, echoing the bloody color of the shining moon. A tremendous force came out of nowhere, pinning her to the table. She gasped, desperately trying to breathe.


The weight of the paint on her body was crushing. It felt as though she was on fire, the painted tracings imbuing her with a sensual heat. There came tremendous pain. She screeched. Had the demoness killed her?


No, the weight was beginning to fade, but her body was incredibly itchy. She shifted against the table, enormously uncomfortable. She wanted to rub her skin, to etch tracks over her chest. There was something inside her, and it wanted out!


This urgent need bloated her loins, and she pressed her hips against the table, trying anything to make it go away. “What is wrong with me?” she screeched.


There came a sharp pain, and she cried out, jerking her neck against the metal collar. Fortunately, it soon abated, replaced with an overall feeling of strangeness. Her need was still there, but it was no longer accompanied by an uncomfortable pressure.


There was something happening down below, but she couldn’t see it. She tried to tilt her head, but it was securely fastened to the table. She had no idea what this meant. She had never felt anything like this before - there was something hard and stiff sticking out from her privates, throbbing with lust.


“There it is,” chirped the demoness, ceasing her chanting and crawling onto the table like a cat. “The ultimate proof that you are of the blood.”


The demoness’ head dipped, and there came a feeling of warmth and a terrible suction. Selene whined at these unusual sensations. Her body was on fire. She needed something, but she wasn’t sure what.


The demoness’ head pulled up with a wet pop. Unfamiliar sensations assaulted Selene from below. The creature had been sucking on something, and she didn’t want her to stop. She grit her teeth, holding back a groan.


“You are ready,” hissed the demoness. “Become one with me, Master. Sate your desires within my willing body. Fuck me, control me with your dick, and embrace your future.”


A hot hand wrapped around the hard length that extended from her pubes, surprising Selene. Her eyes widened as the demoness flexed her hips, driving herself downward onto Selene’s transformed body. The creature’s pussy engulfed her length like a wet glove, instantly sucking her hard rod inside.


Selene grunted like an animal. Unknown instincts surfaced. She knew what she had to do. She pressed her hips upwards, sinking her length deeper inside the outsider’s snatch.


The demoness’ face loomed over hers, her skin highlighted with variegated streaks of red. She huffed cutely as her glowing eyes lit up with lust. “Your dick feels wonderful, Master. Give it to me hard.”


Selene didn’t hesitate. It felt too good, too right. The demoness’ tongue lolled as Selene flexed her hips, driving her new cock inside the demon whore. She needed this, and she deserved it after being treated like a slave.


“That’s it, master,” the demoness whispered, licking her split tongue over Selene’s chin. “You need this as much as I do.”


Selene’s eyes rolled. She didn’t care about resisting any more. The pleasure was shooting into her core, blasting her to heights she had never experienced before. Was this what it felt like to be purely male? To fill a woman with your hard rod?


She grunted, her new penis flexing inside the hot, wet core of the demoness. The creature was made for fucking, and she was going to give it to her. Her only regret was that she was bound. She wanted to be on top, to punish the creature for forcing her to be submissive. It was unnatural.


Her mouth dropped open and she accepted the demoness’ tongue inside. Their tongues intertwined, the demoness’ prehensile flesh twirling around hers. She sucked on the hot wetness, rubbing the ridge of her tongue over one of the demoness’ piercings.


Her pleasure peaked. Nipples hard as tacks, she could feel her dick throbbing. She would teach this evil demoness to capture her and hold her down!  


She continued to suck on the demoness’ tongue as she exploded, ropes of liquid shooting from her penis. She held her hips rigid as the demoness’ pussy clamped onto her dick, milking each pulse of her throbbing rod.


The creature moaned as if she was suckling on a popsicle, her hips pressed hard against Selene’s. Welded together, they both hesitated for a moment, taking in the overwhelming sensations that rushed through their bodies.


The demoness paused for a moment, cupping her breasts. “Wonderful, Master, but we’re only getting started.”


Suddenly, a crackling sound of thunder rippled through the tower, the very stone vibrating as if it had been punched with explosives. The demoness stopped her pumping, resting her hips on Selene’s belly.


She must have heard something, for her expression changed. Selene whined for her to continue, but instead she leaned forward, squeezing Selene’s breasts carefully with her taloned hands.


“That’s one,” the demoness whispered in her ear, chuckling softly. “This is only the beginning. Find me if you want to know what happens next. Master.”


She kissed Selene on the cheek, and lifted her hips off of Selene’s swollen dick. She bounced off the table, tail lifted high for balance. An arch built into the wall rippled with a dark miasma. Her body vanished as she stepped through, demonic laughter echoing off the stone walls.


Almost. She had almost reached satisfaction a second time, but she had been deprived before she could sink all of her lust into that whore of a demoness. She thrust her hips in the air, her throbbing dick pulsing as it exploded. Small spurts of semen sprang from its tip, making a mess on her chest.


She had been rescued somehow, but she didn’t care. Her need to sate herself had overtaken all rational thought. Her chains caught against her restraints as she reached, reaching for something that was impossible. She made an inhuman moan, hissing for the demoness to return through sharpened teeth.


Her eyes rolled as a costumed heroine looked down at her in concern, the world spinning away into blackness.


***


Gasping, Selene blinked her eyes heavily, trying to clear out the bleariness. She felt hot, and her sheets were wrinkled. It must have been a bad night. Closing her eyes, she did her best to cleanse the vivid memories. They felt real now, but in a few minutes they would vanish into the mists of her mind. Nothing to worry about.


Throwing off the covers, she jumped to her feet, stretching her arms and yawning. Best for her to get cleaned up. There was bound to be a long day ahead of her.


Slipping her feet into pale blue slippers, she padded into the bathroom, taking in her frazzled hair and pink undergarments in the mirror. Blink, blink. What was that?


She moved in close, examining her irises. She thought she had caught something unusual in them, but everything appeared perfectly normal.


She cupped a hand against her cheek. Must be her imagination - her bad dream hadn’t gone away yet. She had been having a lot of those lately.


Furrowing her brow, she stared intensely into her hazel eyes. There was no demoness. Nothing had been done to her. Everything was fine.


Sighing, she washed her face, taking care to make sure her skin was properly moisturized. She would take a shower later after a few hours of work on her laptop.


Her mind began to wander, wondering what her girlfriend was doing. At this hour, Aline was probably up, feeding her pet turtle. She had slept over a few times, and always marvelled at how fast the cold-blooded animal could move when food was on the line.


She should give her a call, ask her if she wanted to come over later. If she wanted to be fucked raw.


She blinked. What a strange thought to have. Yes, it would be pleasant to bed her, but her passion was usually a slow burner. Not this burst of lust.


Shrugging, she grabbed a bathrobe and padded over to the kitchen, putting on the coffee maker. They hadn’t done it in a while. Maybe she was hornier than she had thought. That would certainly explain the odd dream.


There came a rumble from her belly. Not too surprising. She had some cornflakes in the cabinet, but did she have enough milk? Pulling open the fridge, she scanned the contents, musing over the half eaten muffin and a container of sad looking lettuce.


With her money, she was certainly able to afford something better, but she hated having anyone else pry into her personal business. Hiring someone to do her shopping for her was a no go. 


She rolled her eyes. That meant she’d have to go out soon, and she wasn’t looking forward to it. Any unexpected interruption to her day always got her riled up.


Grabbing the milk carton, she slammed the door shut and gasped. A wrinkled up blanket on the kitchen table had moved! Did she have rats?


She approached carefully, waving the milk carton in the air, not sure what she was doing. The blanket shifted again, revealing a disheveled face framed by frizzy blue hair and an orange hoodie. The woman’s glasses were askew, her pigtails dragging on the table.


A sudden frisson of throbbing heat assaulted her privates. Aline - was here? She should be at work!


She held out the milk carton as if it was a weapon. “What’s going on here, Ally?” she asked in a high pitched voice. “Why are you sleeping on my kitchen table?”


The drowsy woman smiled, raising her head slowly. “What are you planning on doing with that?” she asked sleepily. “I’m not a cup of coffee.”


Selene bit her lip. She was thirsty for something, but it definitely wasn’t coffee! Her privates were on fire, and an unfamiliar bulge was building inside her panties.


Suddenly, she badly wanted to take Aline by the shoulders, bend her over the kitchen table, and fuck her silly. She wants it, too!


She cursed her traitorous brain. She wasn’t sure what was going on, but it was very, very wrong. But why did it feel so right?


“Selene?” asked Aline with alarm. “What is that?”


Selene blushed, shocked as she covered her bulging crotch with both hands. Whatever it was, the strange, pulsing erection was threatening to spill out of her panties. Why did that even matter, though? She wanted her girlfriend to see her hard rod.


Rod? The thought rocketed through her brain. She knew what this was, but it couldn’t be! It was a dream, only a dream! Her fevered mind circled around the edge of sanity, hysterical.


Her entire reality shifted, and she felt unsteady, catching the edge of the table. “Ally?” she asked, alarmed at how immediate her lust was becoming. “I’m being serious here. What happened yesterday?”


Aline stood, the blanket dropping to the floor. “Skyline brought you here after the superhero guild rescued you. She said that something strange had been done to you, but they weren’t sure what, and they wanted someone to watch over you while they investigated further.”


Selene frowned. Skyline was one of the worst of the superhero bunch. A stuck up, arrogant know it all, wrapped tightly in golden armor and a sense of true justice. If they were involved, this was about to become far more complicated. They might get in my way.


Gasping, she looked up at Aline, suddenly afraid. If everything she remembered had happened, then she had a… dick! She looked down, her heart lurching as she confirmed the truth.


The elastic band of her panties had been stretched, a large rounded head peeking out. It pulsed and throbbed with desire, the tip twitching as an unfamiliar muscle flexed. It was thick, ready, and necessary to plug her girlfriend’s hole until she squealed with pleasure.


Selene frowned, letting the thought fade. No, she wouldn’t let it control her. She would find a solution.


“What’s this?” asked Aline, pressing a fingernail into Selene’s belly. “It’s rather cute. You didn’t tell me you were going to get a tattoo!”


Selene jerked back, following the slender pointing finger. A circular black design had been painted in relief around her belly button, in the image of a moon. It glowed with an ethereal beauty, pulsing in time to her throbbing dick. Another souvenir of the demoness’ influence, no doubt. What other delicious changes had been made to her?


Selene was unable to reply, her thoughts bathed in lustful speculation. She looked over her girlfriend with new eyes. She wanted to unwrap her like a summer sausage, nibbling all of her juicy bits. To make her writhe and cry out in pleasure. To give her the gift she deserved.


She paid for her distraction, as Aline once again seized the initiative. Hands were tugging at her panties, sliding downwards to reveal her pulsing erection. Unbound, the fleshy tube swung forwards, bouncing as its enormous length pointed towards Aline’s open mouth.


“Fuck, they didn’t say anything about this,” Aline murmured in wonder, licking her lips.


She looked up with adoring eyes. “Can I?” she asked, her pursed lips making her look insufferably cute.


She should have said no. This was a step too far. A venture into the unknown from which she wouldn’t be able to recover. She wants to taste it. What would be the harm?


She looked down at her lover benovently. “If you want it, you can have it. Just be gentle, please.”


Aline nodded, her lips opening wide as she quickly plunged her mouth over the head of Selene’s dick, swirling her tongue as she suckled on it like an expert. Selene hadn’t asked for this. It was too much, too soon.


Aline bobbed her head, her hoodie bouncing backwards as Selene’s girthy length penetrated down her throat. Selene groaned. When had she become so good at this? Just watching her lover’s pigtails bouncing as she fellated her was enough to set her on edge.


She wasn’t used to having a dick, didn’t know how it operated. If she had known, she never would have acquiesced to Aline’s request. Her lips felt so good, and she was ready to explode. To give Aline what she needed. She was going to fuck her, to make her understand how much she loved her.


Aline’s head popped off her dick. “It tastes so good!” she declared, smiling crazily.


White dribbles of liquid spilled from her lips, dripping onto the floor. The harsh voice in her mind growled. A waste of good semen.


Her mouth felt odd, but it could wait. Staring at her needy lover, Selene knew that whatever restraint she had left was almost gone. “I need you. Undress. Now.”


Aline blinked slowly, then smiled, moving her hands to unzip her sweatshirt. She made a show of pulling her arms out of each sleeve, spinning the orange garment around a few times before flinging it into a corner and giggling.


Selene stared at her hungrily, her penis flexing as she caught sight of her lover’s exposed cherry red nipples. Aline continued the strip show, leaning forward to show off her large breasts as she tugged at her sweatpants. Wiggling her ass back and forth with every inch, she slid them down with her panties, revealing the cream colored arch of her privates. It was too much to bear.


Seized with lust, she pounced, grabbing Aline by the shoulders. Her lover giggled, cooperating passively as Selene pushed her back against the table. She even spread her legs and lifted her hips, the cheeky woman. She was asking for it!


Unable to wait any longer, she nudged the head of her shaft inside Aline’s willing pussy, her lover’s lips rubbing gently against her dick. She roared, pressing her body forward as she sank deep inside, the unfamiliar pleasure assaulting her privates.


It felt wonderful. It felt right. There would be many she would master with her rod.


Aline made an animalistic noise, her butt rubbing against the table. She laid back, giving Selene a coquettish look. Selene grabbed her legs, pulling her bodily forwards until her dick was buried completely inside her lover. Now, the pounding could commence.


Snarling, she tightened her grip, flexing her hips as began to ram inside Aline, as deep as she could go. Aline gave up giving her looks, her eyes rolling as her arms dangled freely. Boneless, her entire body wobbled as Selene speared her, breasts flopping every time their hips rammed together.


Slamming her dick into this slut made her feel in control. She was dominant, controlling this woman and making her into a proper servant. She would serve. They would all serve. It was good to be the Master.


The longer she fucked this woman, the more her dominant thoughts were taking control. And why shouldn’t they? Here was a slut who was submitting. It was clear the other woman would do anything to be fucked by her dick, and she was beginning to understand why.


It felt absolutely amazing to be railing Aline. Her entire lower body felt alive, the pulsating pumping and throbbing flesh calling to her. Nothing was stopping her from getting what she wanted and she was going to have it. It was an intoxicating feeling. One that wouldn’t stop as long as she listened to her desires.


They whispered around her, coming to life. The kitchen was becoming hazy, a cloudy red mist invading the room. Her vision narrowed to a point, focused on one thing - filling Aline to the brim.


Growling, she pumped faster, her swollen flesh fast reaching a climax. She knew it was going to happen before Aline did, stopping as it exploded, spurting wave after wave of cum into the groaning girl. She wanted to move, but Selene wouldn’t let her, holding her in place as her dick spurted every last drop into her needy tunnel.


This was only the beginning. Aline was worthy, and would receive her seed often.


Grabbing a chair, she pulled Aline with her, forcing them both to sit down at the same time with her hard dick plugged inside her lover. Satisfied, she rested on the kitchen chair, perfectly happy to relax as her lover rubbed her butt against Selene’s pubes. Her hard cock stirred within Aline’s swollen pussy. Mine. She belongs to me!


Aline shifted, leaning forward to suckle at one of Selene’s rigid breasts. Selene squeezed her, very pleased at her ownership of the other women. It felt right to be in control of her, to master her with her turgid dick.


The constant lurid thoughts were becoming more natural. She refused to apologize for being dominant. This was her. This was how she truly felt, and she loved being a Master.


She flexed a hand, frowning. That was strange. Her fingers looked odd, more slender than before, and the nails had elongated, sharpening into points. “Ally, I think we have a problem here.”


Aline craned her neck, adoring eyes focusing up at her with slitted pupils. “What’s wrong, Master?”


Saturday, July 24, 2021

Mid-Summer Update

It's been awhile, so I thought I'd post an update, as I do have a couple of things to talk about. I have two stories that I'm currently spinning, and although one of them is likely to end up on Amazon, I will probably post the other in the usual places.

The Rubber Order has done fairly well in the KDP program, so that's probably where I'm going to keep future releases, since it's honestly a lot more work to publish on Smashwords, and it isn't really that much more profitable. Anything to reduce the amount of time I'm spending on prep work is honestly worth a lot to me.

I've almost, but not quite made enough money to cover the money I've spent for stock photos to create e-book covers, so the entire process has been a wash financially. That's pretty much what I expected, so I'm not disappointed. If you liked The Rubber Order, however, leave a review! It certainly helps.

My non-smut novel, Hot Pressed, is on hiatus until I can make a cover for it and get it read by a few other people. I'll post more about it here when it's ready to go, but don't expect it any time soon.

The first story I'm working on is called Vanished, and involves a fantasy kingdom. The prince of the kingdom is entirely logical and emotionally broken. He gets continually betrothed to a series of different fiancés, who end up vanishing in mysterious circumstances. His newest fiancée is having seriously disturbing dreams where the master takes control of her in a circus like setting.

At the same time, the kingdom is facing a crises with Calendoria, another nation who is attempting to subvert the High Reaches via the use of Calendorian slave suits, which have the power to turn their victims into latex dolls.

This story is likely to end up on Amazon eventually... I already have 10,000 words to start, but the outline is long so I expect this to be novella length. I originally started this one years ago, so it's nice to dust off what I have and get it moving again.

The second story is titled Incorporation, and although I started it Wednesday, it already has 3,000 words. The germ of the idea for this story came from a dream, as do all of my best tales.

Set in a superhero universe, our heroine is kidnapped by a demoness, and through a dark ritual, is turned into a futa. The demoness keeps claiming that our heroine is her master and insists that she will grow into the role. While our heroine escapes, she finds herself increasingly unable to curb her lust towards her girlfriend as her body begins to transform around her...

From these humble beginnings will come a lot of corruption and sexy shenanigans. I've only written one other futa tale before, and that was fan fiction, so this should be quite interesting.

This tale will likely end up being posted online, and will probably be the first story I complete. The outline is fairly short-ish, so with any luck it won't take more than 30,000 words to tell. It's going to be a pure smut banger, with sex scene after sex scene. Fun times.

The Dud

It's pretty rare for me, but sometimes story ideas just don't work out. I've written the outline, I've thought about it for awhile, and I've decided that the idea just isn't exciting enough for me to write. Since my stories tend to be longer form, it is a large investment to begin on a tale, and if I just don't feel it's worth my time, there's no reason to jump into it.

I can count the instances where this has happened on one hand, but it does happen rarely.

Recently-ish, this happened with a story I tentatively titled Bugged Out. It was an attempt to write some truly squicky stuff, but in the end, it failed to launch.

It's not that it wouldn't make a good yarn, it's just that I couldn't scrape up any excitement around actually writing it. Maybe it's because there's too much human in it - I probably just need to write a squicky story where the motive of the squick agents is unknown. Sometimes I get too deep into the motive of everyone in the story and that prevents me from telling it the way I want to.

Anyway, here's the outline. I haven't included random notes or the list of characters with brief descriptions, but this should give some insight into the process I undertake before I start a story:

  1. Lilly is involved with a gang of smugglers, harvesting vegetation outside the sonic barrier of Grayson’s world.

    1. They circumvent the barrier, going on a gathering trip.

    2. Unfortunate encounter with native wildlife. Lilly is captured by an exoskeleton creature.

  2. They are rescued by a patrol in force.

    1. Lilly is taken to the medical research facility. 

  3. Sophia is observing the alien beasts in containment.

  1. This is a female bovine vs the alien creature. It attaches itself to the cow, sucking on its milk. Its jaw fits over the head of the animal, hiding its head. Its ovipositor dangles down below.

  2. The cow looks at her knowingly after it has been infected. It is led out by the research staff.

  3. A more advanced infected subject is led into the chamber. The alien beast has fully integrated with this bovine subject. The staff lead this one in while dressed in full hazmat suits.

  4. The infested creatures attack the wall where Sophia is watching. A swarm of larvae explode from its back, sticking to the wall like leeches.

  5. “How dreadful. Organic creatures can be so inelegant.”

  1. Before she can proceed to the next stage, she is called away.

    1. In her office, she has a conversation with the military governor, Henry O’ Henry.

    2. He wants her to speed up the trials, or funding might be pulled.

      1. Sophia is frustrated because she feels like she is on the cusp of a breakthrough. She has been genetically engineering the local wildlife to create superhuman exoskeletons that spread forcefully and subjugate others.

    3. Resolves to push up her schedule after the conversation.

  2. Back to the experiment cage. Her assistants bring in the prisoner, Lilly, naked and locked to a cart.

    1. “I didn’t mean to, please don’t!”

    2. The punishment is read to her, and the infested animal does its best to try and mount her. They don’t let it, but they’re perfectly happy with letting the larvae get onto the prisoner.

    3. Act closes with a rather gruesome ending - a leech on her neck grows fat with her blood, injecting parasites into her bloodstream.

  3. Change in perspective to Lilly. She has been held until she is completely infested. Indeterminate amount of time.

    1. Ovipositor dangling between her legs

    2. Carapace grown over her head

    3. Belly is growing with eggs that can be implanted

    4. Eggs can be secreted within her throat for hypnotic purposes

    5. The organism she has merged with has enhanced her intelligence and calls her Mother. It is a bit monstrous, gives her extra ‘processing power’ and intelligence, but also bends her thoughts towards supporting and growing more monsters.

  4. Lilly is taken out for testing by Sophia.

    1. Lilly cagily tries to get Sophia to do something that would allow her to get the upper hand, but she fails.

    2. Sophia images Lilly’s growing stomach with an MRI, trying to figure out what the genetically altered alien is doing to her.

    3. Here we can explain the special properties of the aliens of Grayson’s world, parasitic creatures that had limited intelligence until the ‘great’ Sophia decided to uplift them.

    4. Lilly is taken back to her cell, where she plots a breakout.

  5. Swap to Sophia. She is sitting at her terminal, reviewing the scan, trying to figure out how the alien is changing Lilly.

    1. Suddenly, the power goes out. Emergency power snaps on with red lighting, ensuring that the alien organisms can’t escape.

    2. Her terminal going dark, Sophia rushes out into the corridor. The hallway vid screens snap on, the governor announcing that the colony is under attack. He commands them to conceal or destroy important research via an order in the colony handbook.

    3. Sophia is aghast. She cannot abide the idea of abandoning everything she’s worked for.

    4. Before the governor can complete his broadcast, it is interrupted by the leader of the invading aliens, Han’lith. He declares that the colony is now his, and that all of them are his slaves. Anybody who resists will be destroyed. As a demonstration of his power, he destroys the governor’s mansion.

  6. Swap to Lilly. Sophia arrives at her cell and demands that she be converted by the alien creature.

    1. Sophia reasons it’s the only way to avoid being made a slave of the alien invaders. If they work together, they should be able to turn the tables on the invaders.

      1. She knows that once infested, the original infestor has some control over the people that have been infested.

    2. Lilly doesnt accept, but Sofia forces her to, by seducing her and by using some tech she has to control Lilly.

    3. Hot impregnation scene. Sophia is infested. Sophia implies that she has full control.

  7. Swap to Hanlith. He is informed by his search parties that a research lab has been found. He takes his most trusted lieutenant, Salthiss, with him.

    1. When they breach the lab, they are shocked at what they find. The interior has been corrupted by the natural landscape outside the sonic barrier, which their attack has interrupted.

    2. When they are attacked by a swarm of larvae which takes out several of his men, Halith decides to leave and send an attack squad to sterilize the structure and secure the research.

    3. Before they can retreat, Sophia enters.

      1. She is bloated with eggs, the infestation not yet complete. She acts like she controls the place. Attempts to seduce the commander.

      2. When he is not receptive, she attacks. She is stopped by his lieutenant and is wounded.

    4. Lilly enters and forces them all to stop, using the glowing egg in her mouth. She smashes Salthiss against the wall and shoves it down Halith’s throat.

      1. Sophia is rapidly healing and tries to take control, however, she is not the Mother.

      2. Lilly takes control, brute forcing her way through any controls Sophia has built in. Limiters removed, she puts them all under her control.

  8. Lilly, now in command, makes the entire planet hers. She cuts a deal with the military to supply them the military exoskeletons they want, in exchange for leaving them alone. She doesn’t tell the military that she will retain control of them, just in case.

Thursday, May 6, 2021

The Rubber Order - Released!

My new novella is finally available on Amazon, here:

The Rubber Order - Kindle edition by Caroline Waters

If you like it, please leave a review!

I know it won't be to everyone's taste, but I do hope some will enjoy what it brings to the table. Cheers!

Sunday, May 2, 2021

The Rubber Order is releasing this week

I finally have the text edited and the cover done for "The Rubber Order." I'll be navigating the vagaries of the release process tomorrowish, after which point it will be in Amazon's hands as to whether it is approved or not.

This story has an okay chance of being approved, given that it doesn't have any overt brainwashing in it (though there is some rather heavy bondage based training involved, and perhaps some form of Stockholm syndrome).

I hesitate to promote this story too much in the usual places, because it definitely doesn't follow the work I've done in the past. I've written very little direct M/F sex, though I have been trending in that direction more often as the years pile on.

What's truly a first is the subject matter. I suspect quite a lot of people will find it uncomfortable to mix sex and religious themes, and might reject it simply due to that, but if that happens, that's okay.

This is my way of exploring the intersection between religion and fetish sex. What happens if the the two worlds combine? Can it even work? I think it can.

But what do you think? If you read my story, I certainly would be interested in hearing from you, though I suspect this may definitely not be to the taste of my regular readers.

At any rate, I'll post again if/when it gets accepted.

I won't be publishing this story to Smashwords, at least at the start, because I'm going to trial using Kindle Unlimited with it. Sorry! I might reverse course at some point downstream.

The Cover



This cover was done entirely by me, because for some reason I can't seem to convince myself to pay someone else to do it for me. I think it came out okay, given my limited image editing abilities. I'm definitely better at working with stock photos than I am at making art myself.

Please, please, please, if you're a photographer, use a green background when you take photos of your models. It makes it much, much, MUCH easier to composite them with other images if you do.

The Rubber Order Synopsis

In case you forgot, or if you don't feel like digging, here's the current synopsis for "The Rubber Order" in case you're intrigued:

"Felicia's troubled relationship with her husband was common knowledge. Seeking outside validation, she went on double dates with her friend, Ava, to relieve the boredom. This soon descended into a series of unsatisfying one night stands, until one day they were both abducted by the Rubber Order.

The mysterious nuns of the Order, dressed in fetish latex clothing, purport to be members of the one true faith. When Felicia isn't convinced, they put her through a grueling training program with numerous incentives, including intimate encounters with a man she begins to suspect is secretly her husband. As her friend struggles with her training, Felicia starts to believe that her only way out is to give in.

The highly anticipated ceremony of Pairing is fast approaching, during which all secrets will be revealed."

Hot Pressed


Work is continuing on my fantasy novel. I am currently on page 156 of 255 in the editing process, with progress at about 5 pages per day. I should be done with that in about 20 days, at which point I will need to decide whether it needs more love.

I've given this story to my family members to pre-read, as it's not smut. It is over 100,000 words, though, which means I may have to cut something out to make it work better as a novel.

Stay tuned for more news on this, though I suspect the lag time on getting this released will be longer term.

Other Projects?


I have some ideas, but nothing definite, at the moment. I would like to write a short story in the Rubber Order universe as a bit of advertising, as I think that worked fairly successfully for my other trilogy. That story, since it won't be formally published, can certainly delve more into a... brainwashing sort of story line.

I also have a ton of spin off ideas from the time I spent last summer working on my interactive fiction game. Damn, I haven't really pushed that forward lately, have I? I suppose I lost a lot of motivation when I realized just how large the stupid thing was getting. It really needs a rethink of what I'm trying to accomplish with it before I start work on it again. I suspect the battle system really just needs to be removed so I can lean into the bad endings more, since I do have a fair amount of content already.

Well, given where that's at, it's more likely that I'll pick up something to write next. I would like to write a short story that can be posted on MCStories and Literotica, I think. Something suitably weird. Maybe it will have something to do with mind-controlling insect aliens, or the Queen of Chains, or something else. I'm not sure yet.

Friday, April 2, 2021

Current Projects Edition: Update on "Hot Pressed" and "The Rubber Order"

This should be an exciting day, I suppose, but really it's just a harbinger for what's to come.

I now have the first drafts of both my novel "Hot Pressed" and my novella, "The Rubber Order," completed. "Hot Pressed" has come in at about ~109,000 words, while "The Rubber Order" was over 50,000 last I checked.

From previous experience, "Hot Pressed" could grow another 5,000 words at the end of the editing process, which really makes the story too long. I have a candidate chapter I could cut, but I would have to write an alternate, shorter scene to make it work if I do that.

What I'm planning on doing instead is to edit everything first, then consider trying to cut out some bulk. We'll see how that works.

This is all to say that I now have ~160,000 words to read and edit, which is easily two novels worth. This won't be a quick process, so the best I can say is that it'll probably be 3-4 months before I'm even ready to think about publishing.

Since that's so far out, in theory I could write something shorter to fill in the gaps, but then there will be EVEN MORE for me to edit. Ha ha!

I'm not sure if that is feasible. We shall see. There certainly are a lot of random ideas burbling around, but no clear short story plot at the moment. (As short as my stories ever get!)

At any rate, I haven't given up. I'm still working on these projects!

Saturday, February 20, 2021

Upcoming projects edition: "The Rubber Order" and "Hot Pressed"

If I've been radio silent the last few months, it's certainly not due to slacking. No, indeed, I actually have been quite busy. Around Thanksgiving I picked up two stories off the backlog I've really wanted to finish, and I've been writing at least 500 words for each story per day since then.

That has frequently resulted in about 1250 words per day, which I think is a tremendous level of forward progress for anyone. Indeed, I haven't really had any free time to do much of anything else.

Since both stories appear to be nearing completion in the next two weeks, this seems like a good time to reveal them before I start editing and the long, grinding process to get them published online.

What I have here for this post, then, is a rough stab at the blurb for each of the stories I've been working on. Neither of them follow my usual fare, so I don't think it likely that usual fans of my works will like these, but you never know!

What matters more to me is that I'll finally have them completed, and not sitting on my backlog for another couple of years.

Without further ado...

The Rubber Order

The idea for this one germinated in or around December 2019. I started writing the first chapter during the beginning of 2020, but once the pandemic took hold, it got lost in the shuffle. In November of 2020, I had the first chapter complete, which was about 6,000 words long. The story is now breaking over 50,000 words and looks like a novella to me.

The main seed of the idea was - what if, in this world of easy sex and broken relationships, there was a religious order that forced people to marry and have children, in a convent setting? And, of course, this order has its members exclusively wear fetish rubber clothing, because that fits in with my inclinations. The kicker is that they have LOTS of sex, but it can only be between proper married couples.

This was probably the largest restriction to work around, as with smut stories I'm used to having everything and everyone fuck each other. Also, there's no mind control involved per se, unless you involve a sort of subtle Stockholm syndrome.

Strange, no? A far cry from what I usually write. Here's an attempt at a synopsis:

"Felicia's troubled relationship with her husband was common knowledge. Seeking outside validation, she went on double dates with her friend, Ava, to relieve the boredom. This soon descended into a series of unsatisfying one night stands, until one day they were both kidnapped by the Rubber Order.

The mysterious nuns of the order, dressed in fetish clothing, purport to be members of the one true faith. When Felicia isn't convinced, they put her through a grueling training program with numerous incentives, including personal encounters with a man she strongly suspects is secretly her husband. As her friend struggles with her training, Felicia starts to believe that her only way out is to give in.

The highly anticipated ceremony of Pairing is fast approaching, during which all secrets will be revealed."

Hot Pressed

Hot Pressed is a much older story, first started somewhere around 2016. Coming into November of 2020, I had about 27,000 unedited words and an outline of a story I knew would turn into a novel. I've been working on it diligently since then, and it has recently broken 80,000 words.

This is the first non-smut story I've ever pushed to completion, the desire being to have at least one thing I can show my straight laced family. They, ah, don't know of my fetishes, for good reason.

There are themes of mind control in this story, but it certainly is not the main driver of the plot, and there will be no sex in this story. Just light romance, an adventure, and a bit of a political thriller complete with backstabbing. Here's the synopsis:

"Namzu was an orphan, a spy, a sometimes thief, and a complete novice at political intrigue. Spending her days and nights on the streets, she never could have imagined her life was about to be tipped upside down when the airship Nekh Wesket arrived on the solemn shores of Subartu from Remenkhemi.

Sneaking aboard the airship, she uncovers their strange plan to find new recruits by putting them into masks which grant them the power of the gods. Stealing an artifact as proof, she quickly runs into trouble when it bonds with her arm, opening a mystical connection to the snake goddess, Wadjet.

Stuck with the goddess in her head, she is forced to run from the only home she ever knew, finding herself entangled in a web of dangerous foreign plots.

The vicious battle for the throne is about to begin."

Conclusion

I expect I'll have both of these stories on sale sometime a few months from now, perhaps near the end of spring. I won't commit to any other projects now, but getting these done has been more satisfying than anything else I've done recently, so there's a good chance I'll find another project to pick up then. Hopefully, something that takes a few less words to tell...

Oh yes, and the Twine game. I haven't forgotten about it - but let's be honest, currently it's acting as bit of an idea dump. When will I have something ready to show for it? Absolutely no idea. Maybe I'll pick it up again one of these days. I should have plenty of bad ends to play with, at least.

Monday, December 21, 2020

Christmas Edition

I think most people would agree that this has been a pretty messed up year for everyone involved, myself included. My optimistic estimates on how long it would take to get things done in the summer time were grossly inaccurate, as they didn't take into account the unknown variables of my health and shifting priorities.

As such, I hate to say that I don't have anything to release at the moment!

That isn't to say I haven't been working on things, I just haven't been working on my game, specifically.

Just a quick run down of what I've been up to lately:

  1. Edited 500 pages of my friend's novels (that's been on the backlog for awhile).
  2. Edited 27,000 words of my own fantasy novel (that's also been on the backlog for a long time).
  3. Written 7,000 more words for said novel.
  4. Working on the Bad End: 'Your Offspring's Milk.' This ending will occur when you're too disobedient and you've had a child at The Farm. They've been forced to bind you in latex and leather to keep you from hurting yourself and others. They use your own daughter (now grownup) to control you and make you learn to love your slavery.
So it's not all bad. I am still working on the game, on and off. But it does mean that the likelihood of getting something playable any time soon is nil.

As is usual, what you can produce never matches your imagination.

The semi-good news is that I've set a goal of 500 words per day on my novel, which means it should be done in a few months and I'll free up to do more work on this, or perhaps I might spend some time working on "The Rubber Order," another story that's been languishing in the meantime.

That one I think may eventually go to Amazon, because it's a bit atypical of my usual output - I don't usually write male dom, but it fits this particular story better.

I've also had ideas surrounding a fantasy story called "Queen of Chains: Forged Anew." I have a mostly complete outline for this, though I don't have the ending nailed down yet. This particular story is an outgrowth of ideas I've had while putting together Realm of Darkness. It will probably end up being something I release on MCStories.

These ideas are exciting, but I can't say for sure if or when they'll ever come to fruition! I will be sure to share when I have more information!

Merry Christmas everyone, and here's hoping next year will be better for everyone!

Twine Tip

Before I leave you, I thought I'd mention a solution to a problem that would have saved me a lot of time, had I known it before I started working with Twine.

I'm not sure if this is sugarcube specific, but it turns out you can use this syntax to specify a different color for your text:

@@color:COLORNAME;<Your Text Here>@@

This works like this:

@@color:#a342bd;"I love you so much," whispers a tender voice.@@

You can use an HTML color code, as above, or even the color name, like 'slategray'.

There's no need to add spans, tags, or special javascript. It just works.

Unfortunately, I had to spend forever removing my previous formatting to use this instead, because it doesn't require any escaping of the text and is therefore superior. I'm not sure if I've fixed it everywhere yet...

Saturday, August 15, 2020

Realm of Darkness:

Work continues on the Farm dungeon. By my count, I have around 17 bad ends in the entire game completed, and I'm working on number 18. 

I'm trying to get at least one bad end done per animal variation, both male and female cows, horses, and pigs. I'm about half done with that... because I'm a little heavy on adding female cow bad endings as I enjoy writing them more.

Once the bad ends are done, the trick will be adding in sufficient events and connective tissue to actually get to these bad ends.

To that end, I've been working on an encounter system which will allow me to dynamically select events based on probability weights.

This is a common programming problem when doing such things as randomly selecting brokers to process data or another activity which requires selecting a particular value more often than other values, randomly.

Here's the code I've put together based on research I've done:

window.calculateEncounter = function(possibleEncounters){
	var i = 0;
	var j = 0;
	var totalWeight = 0;
	var keys = Object.keys(possibleEncounters);

	for (; i < keys.length; i++) {
	  totalWeight += possibleEncounters[keys[i]].weight;
	}

	var randomWeightNumber = Math.floor(Math.random() * totalWeight)
	var selectedKey = "";

	for (; j < keys.length; j++) {
	  if(randomWeightNumber < possibleEncounters[keys[j]].weight){
		selectedKey = keys[j];
		break;
	  }

	  randomWeightNumber = randomWeightNumber - possibleEncounters[keys[j]].weight;
	}

	return selectedKey;
}

window.calculateEncounterWithInclude = function(possibleEncounters){
	var selectedKey = calculateEncounter(possibleEncounters);

	return "<<include \"" + selectedKey + "\">>";	
}

window.calculateEncounterWithLink = function(optionNumber, optionName, linkText, possibleEncounters){
	var selectedKey = calculateEncounter(possibleEncounters);
	
	if(linkText){
		return "<span id=\"" + optionName + "Act\"><<link \"(" + optionNumber + ") " + linkText + "\" \"" + selectedKey + "\">><</link>></span>";			
	}else{
		return "<span id=\"" + optionName + "Act\"><<link \"(" + optionNumber + ") " + selectedKey + "\" \"" + selectedKey + "\">><</link>></span>";		
	}
}

The possibleEncounters input looks like the below object, specified in the 'StoryInit' passage so it will be run at the start of the game. A setup variable is used because these are static variables that do not need to be altered or tracked during the game.

<<set setup.testEncounters to {
  "Test Encounter A": {
    weight: 10
  },
  "Test Encounter B": {
    weight: 10
  },
  "Test Encounter C": {
    weight: 100
  },
}>>

The object consists of a passage name in the Twine game to select, and the 'weight' that passage is assigned.

The 'weight' is relative, which means in this case that 'Test Encounter C' would be selected as the passage to use ten times more often than the other passages.

The 'calculateEncounter' method iterates through the provided objects, getting the total weight of all encounters. Then, it randomly chooses a number between zero and the total weight. If the random number chosen is below the weight of the event being iterated, that event is selected. Otherwise, the weight of the event is subtracted from the random number, and the next event is inspected. This occurs until an event is chosen.

'calculateEncounterWithInclude' generates an include statement to be inserted into a Twine story passage. The include statement imports the contents of one passage into another passage.

'calculateEncounterWithLink' allows you to specify a link to the passage that has been chosen randomly. 'optionNumber' and 'optionName' are used for specifying a keyboard shortcut. 'linkText' is optional, but allows you to specify a name for the link different than the name of the destination passage.

Combined together, using this code in a passage would look like this:

This would be your generic location passage that needs a random encounter.

Then, you would have a randomly selected passage, weighted based on what is configured:

<<print calculateEncounterWithInclude(setup.testEncounters)>>

<<print calculateEncounterWithLink(1, "one", "This encounter is truly random.", setup.testEncounters)>>

The first print statement would be replaced with the randomly selected passage contents, while the second print statement would turn into a link. When this passage is visited, the code will execute and randomly choose an encounter based on the specified weight.

The code above would live in the 'Encounter Tester' passage, and when that passage is visited, one of the test encounter passages would be chosen to be included in that passage.

This is a pretty neat way to allow me to write standalone encounters and include them in the adventure pages. I will be using this logic pretty much everywhere in the story where random encounters occur.

In the Farm, there is a day loop, which means at the end of an encounter the game will need to increment the time and put you back in the right spot. I'll talk about my system for doing this another time. One major topic per post, I think!

This illustrates why it takes so much time to make a proper interactive game - there is a lot of logic under the covers like this that needs to be implemented to even make the story work - especially if you're trying to do more than a simple 'choose your own adventure' story!

With any luck, the next time I post, I'll be able to say that I have all of the main bad ends written! (And maybe even some of the encounters, too!)


Monday, August 3, 2020

Realm of Darkness - Starting the Farm Edition

Welcome back to my semi-irregular updates. Today I'd like to discuss the so-called 'dungeon' I'm working on, called 'The Farm.'

For the first pass, I'm planning on allowing you to choose which type of animal you're in danger of being converted into - a humanoid cow, horse, or pig - futa or female.

A large part of the farm will circle around the main gameplay loop of being taken care of by the farmhands and getting milked. The longer you given in to their demands, the more animal-like you'll become. If your intelligence drops too low, you're going to experience a bad end.

There will be other ways to experience a bad end too, of course, some of them more challenging and difficult to find than others. Today I wrote a bad end which has very similar themes to Tabico's 'Herd Instinct,' which fans of that work should enjoy.

There are several NPCs you'll meet at the farm, and whether you help them (or not) will affect their fates and yours. You may even be able to recruit one or two of them to escape and live with you outside the Farm, if you're careful.

Depending on how much the farm staff trust you, you'll be more or less free to roam The Farm. The more you defy them, the more restrained you'll be. For example, if you try to bite them, you'll be muzzled with a bit gag or another suitable implement. These 'debuffs' will make it more difficult for you to perform certain actions at The Farm and to find a way to escape.

Currently, I am working on the introductory area for The Farm, which by itself is somewhat complicated since I need to introduce all the characters and provide choices that allow you to figure out which animal you wish to become (see below picture for a sample of that game flow). Ideally all paths would be just as attractive, but that's probably not realistic, since I'm the biggest fan of the female bovine paths. Still, I'll do my best with the other paths as well.


In addition to what I'm writing, I've also fleshed out various areas you'll be able to visit while trapped on The Farm (subject to change). See a sample below:


There needs to be a way to escape, of course, but it shouldn't be too easy. And I'm planning for there to be more than one way to 'win' your way out of The Farm. Some of them will be more morally gray than others.

My first goal is to get the main gameplay loop working. Then, I will be working on adding sufficient random events to make the game seem fresh as well as unlockable events based on the stats you have. After that, I'll focus on the adventure mechanics in the farm as well as implementing various ways and means to escape.

Big plans, I know. I'm turning into Peter Molyneux here with the promises. We'll see how much is actually reasonable to complete, since I don't even have a way currently of getting your main character from the central town to The Farm without using the debug menu.

I'm thinking tentatively version one of the game should probably include a fleshed out central town as well as a completely playable Farm dungeon. If I get that far, I think that's probably a sufficient vertical slice to show off what I have and get some feedback. It still seems reasonable to get there by the end of the year, but things could always change... I'll keep ya'll up to date here.

That's a wrap for now. Here's the count of bad ends currently in the game: 13. Many more to come - especially at The Farm, which has 15 more already stubbed out! Not to mention the town, which will definitely need quite a few as well!

Sunday, July 19, 2020

Realm of Darkness - Refactoring Edition

Hello! It's time again for an infrequent update about the game I've been working on.

This week has been pretty rough because I've needed to completely rework how the UI is going to operate. I wasn't at all satisfied with where it was at, and I'm much happier with it now.

That of course means there hasn't been a lot of content implemented, but the content that is there is looking much better.

I've recently played 'Degrees of Lewdity' and recognized superior design when I saw it. If you want to check out that game, it's located here: https://vrelnir.blogspot.com/

There are some fun and interesting transformations in that game, but in my mind they suffer because they're not true physical transformations. And while you can turn yourself into a cow and get milked, there's no real consequence or bad end for doing so. I would much rather have a hard end condition where you can indeed fail, and fail badly - because that's where the fun writing is!

Still, it's worth a look if you have some spare time.

Here are some relevant examples of UI design ideas I've borrowed from that game:


'Degrees of Lewdity' allows you to select options using keyboard shortcuts. This makes it a ton easier to navigate (and to debug). Using code from the below link, I've implemented this in all existing passages of the game (that took quite a while, the game is starting to grow).

https://www.reddit.com/r/twinegames/comments/5t73zc/keyboard_driven_twining_tutorial/

Better to get that done now rather than later, I suppose.


I have changed the sidebar to display your current state. This used to be in a menu window, but I realized part of the fun is seeing your body slowly succumb to the strange transformations of this world you're in, so now this sidebar dynamically updates during your adventures.

Adventure stats are TBD and will go in the side bar when I've figured out what they should be. While you are trapped in a dungeon, there will be different stats that apply. For example, you might have to deal with an 'intelligence' and 'obedience' stat while trapped in 'The Farm,' which will affect possible bad ends.


The side bar menu items now open in a window instead of taking over the passage display. This allows me to show inventory and other stats while keeping you in the same context of wherever you are in the story, which simplifies story flow tremendously. The inventory screen is not finalized - lots more changes are likely to come!


I have added an achievements menu which shows you what you've managed to achieve in the game so far. This state will persist across runs of the game on the same browser (using the local browser store). This should act as a guide to let you know what content you've seen, and what you're missing. Yes, I will be adding some bad ends that will be quite difficult to find. A bit of a treasure hunt, as it were.

With these changes in place, I'm finally ready to start working on some new content. Yesterday I spent time brainstorming three major dungeons:

  1. The Farm - If you are unlucky enough to find yourself here, you'll slowly become more like an animal. The current possible paths will include male and female cows, horses (ponygirls, yes!), and pigs. I'm open for other ideas, but I need to keep the list short for now so that I can get something implemented.
  2. The Cathedral of Domaya - If you join the church, you will partake in Her milk and help her to bring others into communion with her. The church is harboring darker secrets which you will get a chance to explore.
  3. The Research Lab - Run by a literal computer, the lab is building a Hive of Drones to take over World's end. If you're not careful, you will end up a mindless Drone. The Hive is exploring ways to generate high end milk from its Drones. There might be a way to incur dissension in the ranks if you play your cards right.
Yes, there's lots of milking that's going to happen, and competition between the different dungeons. I wasn't initially planning that, but it's going to work out that way. It sounds like fun to me!

I have a few other dungeons on my list, but they're not fleshed out yet:
  • The Bee Hive
  • Dominatrix Dungeon
Eventually I'd like to to tie this all together by making a 'good' end for the story... and if you succeed in the dungeons, you ought to be able to unlock a management game to make good your gains. And I'd like to implement a simple sexual fighting system. And transformation items. And flesh out the town. And program in paths for the different hypnotic outcomes you will experience.

As you can see, there's plenty to work on. I'm hoping to be able to put out an initial version of the game by the end of this year, but no promises!

Saturday, July 4, 2020

Realm of Darkness - 4th of July Edition

It's been a few months, and my health hasn't really improved. Fortunately, lockdowns are lifting and I'll be able to see doctors again soon. In the meantime, I figured I would give an update on the Interactive Fiction story I've been working on, currently titled 'Realm of Darkness.'

The backstory is that you are a magical girl, stolen from Earth and brainwashed by demons in a realm called 'World's End.' Their goal is to send you back to Earth to capture the other magical girls and make them permanent slaves of the demons.

Written in second person, you will be attempting to escape this extra-dimensional world without being transformed into a strange new creature. You probably won't be able to avoid being bred by the inhabitants, or changed in strange ways - but will you end up leaving a servant of the demons, or your own person? You decide!

Pretty much anything is going to go in this world. You start out a woman, but can choose to become a futa, if you wish (or, depending on the bad end, if you don't wish). Since there's going to be lots of humanoid critters in this place, there's inevitably going to be furry type sex, though it should be obvious and avoidable depending upon what you choose to do. This is pretty much carte blanche for my strange and bizarre imagination to run wild without any restrictions.

There will definitely be lots of latex and milking, of course, as well as all kinds of bizarre and unfortunate transformations.

I do plan on posting this on tfgames when I have enough content, but that will be quite some time, I'm afraid. I need to have enough that I don't feel like it's too incomplete to post. Ideally it would have a nice vertical slice with good bones I can add flesh onto.

That said, let's talk about the battle system.

Your goal is to beat the enemy by one of three methods - draining their HP to 0, raising their arousal to 100, or dropping their willpower to 0. The type of attack you choose determines which stat you are targeting. In the image below, it's just your bare hands, which do HP damage.

Each attack costs a certain amount of stamina to perform, which limits how often you can use your attacks, and the amount of damage you do is determined by the attack.




At the same time you are attacking, the enemy is also attacking you.

The status box tells you which body parts the enemy is attacking. They can be attacking up to three different body parts with a ~33% chance to hit each part, but it's random which body parts are selected. The same body part can be selected multiple times, which means there is a possibility that the enemy will select the same body part three times, giving them a 100% chance to attack that body part!

This can be useful, as every round you are given the opportunity to block an attack on one body part.

When the enemy hits a body part, it becomes bound. If enough body parts are bound by the enemy, you lose, so it's in your best interest to block as many attacks as possible.

As the battle goes on, there are fewer free body parts, and therefore less body parts for the enemy to choose. This makes it easier to block attacks, which is useful when you're trying to remove the last 10 HP from that stubborn demon!




I have plenty of bad end ideas. So far, I've written only about ~11 of them, but there will be plenty more to come.

Here's a sample of some of the things I'm currently thinking of. These are just some of the ones I haven't written yet... there's plenty of others that I'm not showing. :)



I don't have a time frame for release. It's pretty much going to be a 'when it's ready' situation. Rough guess is at least a few more months before I have anything of consequence. I'll try to periodically update here when I find the motivation.

In the meantime, I have a bad end involving very long tongues to write.

I hope you all have an excellent fourth!

Tuesday, May 26, 2020

Quarantine Life: Interactive Fiction Ahoy

Things haven't changed that much for me during the quarantine, for good or for ill. One thing that has changed, however, is long bus rides on public transit. They're... not happening for obvious reasons.

Without those long, boring spaces of time to fill, I've found myself... not really writing, at all, which is rather a bummer. I have a chapter of a random story on hold for now until I get back into that mode again, which will likely be quite some time. It seems to me that in this area I may not be back on public transit for at least another month, potentially, depending on whether the office opens back up.

With that in mind, I got the bug recently to work on a different kind of project - one I've been thinking about for a long time. Interactive fiction, specifically using Twine (https://twinery.org/).

Now, using Twine is simple enough if all you need to do is write a multiple choice story, but my goal has always been more ambitious than that.

Unfortunately, that means writing an awful lot of javascript, and an awful lot of testing. You know, a fully fledged software project.

Anybody know of a source control repository that's kink-friendly? It does get rather tedious having to back things up personally...

Anyhow, I'm very close to having a working battle system where the goal is to attack the enemy until they run out of HP, you get them too aroused to continue fighting, or you mesmerize them so thoroughly that they cannot continue. On the other hand, the enemy is trying to bind your body so that you can't keep fighting. If they bind enough body parts, it's game over, and they get to ravish you in any way they choose!

I'm planning on involving lots of bondage, transformation, and mind control themes. It should end up on https://tfgames.site/ eventually, but I don't have a time frame for that. If I had to guess, it's probably going to be another couple of months before it's in a state where I think there's enough content in it to have others run through it. Nothing I hate more than reading an interactive fiction and getting to a work in progress section just as it's getting good.

I've only been working on it for about two and a half weeks so far, and the amount of progress is pretty gratifying:


There is a lot to write, and a lot to program before this is ready to see prime time. I may make some more work in progress posts if it strikes my fancy. Certainly there's been plenty of javascript necessary to make the internal systems work that might be interesting to others.

Here's to hoping that all of the economy gets running again soon! Cheers everyone!