Sunny Sunday - End of the Week Edition

Hot Pressed

Despite all the recent distractions, I'm still been making progress on this story. I'm at a bit of crisis stage with what I'm going to do with it when I'm done, however. The length is not so much the issue, but the simple fact is that it hasn't really turned into a smut story while I've been writing it.

Yes, there's mind control. Yes, there's bodily transformations. But so far there's been very little body horror, and no sexual situations whatsoever. The main romance is going to be more of a one night stand at the end due to the length of the story and where it's been taking me. The main character just won't be spending enough time for the potential love interest for sparks to fly.

I could increase the length to make the story a novel, but I'm not invested enough in the idea to do that, and that would require me to plot out a second half to the story. What I've got is a good starting point, but hell if I know what would happen in the second half if I did that.

And then even if I did that, I'm not sure where I'd post it. I could post it here, but it wouldn't really fit in with the other smut I'm writing. Maybe ya'll would be interested in it anyway.

What a pickle. Perhaps I should just cut my losses and release it when I get to the original plotted stopping point.

While I wrestle with that dilemma, I did sit down this week and figure out what the airship interior should look like so I can write the "final" scenes with some consistency. It's almost time for some action, some battling, and some sexy times.

Now if only I knew where I was going with this story... how frustrating!

Robotic Restitution

I finished editing another chapter this week, putting me at 15/20, with six chapters remaining. That will conclude the most time consuming part of writing this trilogy, though there still remains another proofreading pass to go once that is done.

After each chapter is finished with editing, they seem to gain between 300-400 words in length on average. This shouldn't be too much of a problem, since the last two book are around 65,000 words now, slightly under the target of 70,000. I don't see the need to cut anything out, so that's good news.

I've fooled around with images trying to figure out covers, with no success. That process will have to continue in the upcoming weeks.

I did, however, put together a synopsis for each of the three stories with tentative book titles. Everything is subject to change, of course. I know there's danger that Kindle books can be put into an adult-only box where they are not discoverable based on the synopsis, but I can't do too much about that. I have to be honest about what's actually in the story so I don't put off anybody who's actually interested.

 Here's what I've got:

 The Hive Elusive

 Adele is forced to visit her Aunt Clara by her father, Emperor of the Frysian empire, in order to remove her from danger while peace talks occur. Instead, she sails right into danger along with the rest of the crew on her ship. She is captured along with three other unfortunate crew members and subjected to sinister manipulations of body and mind. How long can she hold out before giving in to her robotic captors and their Hive? And what other underhanded machinations of her father will she discover along the way? Each careless action brings her that much closer to being the perfect Hive Drone.

A lesbian tale of blue colored women, hive recruitment and conversion via sensory deprivation, gas masks, bondage, blue gas, oiled bodies, and mind control.

 The Hive Advancing

Adele has been ransomed and sent back to her father. However, nothing is as it should be. Her memories locked away, she cannot remember the ordeal she has suffered at the hands of her captors or the blossoming romance she had experienced while in captivity. Worse, a corrupting intelligence has been implanted in her mind, fracturing it into multiple warring personas. Which persona will have the strength to succeed? Will anything be left of her original personality after the dust has settled? And will she ever remember the Drone that she loves?

A lesbian tale of blue colored women, hive recruitment and conversion via meditation sessions, hypnotic displays, bondage, blue gas, oiled bodies, and mind control.

The Hive Ascendant

Now of one mind, Adele has the strength to face what is asked of her. Will she be able to satisfy Hive's demands, or will her newly constructed mind crumble under the stress? With more Drones to deal with than ever before, how will she juggle each of her new companions to keep them all satisfied while fulfilling her duties as Director?With Hive spreading, can anyone in the empire stop the invasion?

A lesbian tale of blue colored women, hive recruitment and conversion via invasion, processing, hypnotic displays, bondage, blue gas, oiled bodies, and mind control.

Midweek Hotness: Discipline Hentai Edition

I've been threatening to review a Hentai for some time, and this seems like a good week to do it!

On the docket this time: 'Discipline - The Record of a Crusade,' which came out in 2002, though I probably didn't see it for about a year or two until after it came out (fan subs are amazing, but do take some time).

This show contains some fun femdom elements, lots and lots of sex, bondage, chastity belts, and some F/F pairings as the show rolls on. It also takes place in a school, and the student council has all the power (check off all the usual anime tropes! Though, back then they were all pretty fresh).

For brevity, I'll talk through only the first episode for now (the series has six!)

We start off with a 'bang' (oh ho ho), where the MC has his virility measured. Why? I'm sure we'll find out later. Probably.

 The girl testing him seems to be confused about penises and how they work.

The lady performing the evaluation gives him an A, naturally. He's a natural performer.

Later on, our MC arrives at the school's main dorm. Pikachu surprised face.

Ah yes, here comes the innocent blue haired girl, possible girlfriend material. It's too bad she's dumb as a box of rocks and can't figure out what's going on around her. I think she's a little slow.

Saori takes the MC around to meet the other girls in the dorm. They're all pretty much total pervs.

Green haired girl seems to think it's clothing optional day.

Studious Girl is actually pretty damn creepy.

She seems fine now, but you find out later she's spying on people having sex with each other. She just likes to watch.

It could be. But only if you like having lots of sex. LOTS of sex.

Hell, he hasn't even been there a day before one of the dorm students comes on to him.

They smash while she vibes her ass. MC doesn't even ask about STDs.

Not that he protests. At all. Seems to be pretty into it. I suppose I can't blame him too much, she is pretty amazing.

The next day, they enter the Academy. Not many saints here despite the name.

Nothing like getting your balls whipped the first day at school. MC doesn't seem to react too much to this punishment. Maybe he likes it?

We meet a new character. I'll call her Miss Drill hair until we get her actual name (it's Leona).

It took awhile, but we finally get the MC's name. Taku, Taku, Takurou the transfer student. You would think this means he's gonna be taking it up the butt pretty soon, but that actually never happens. They just want his cock. Badly.

Miss Drill Hair has a smoking bod, but like all of them, she just wants to jump Takurou. After she puts him in his place. Puts him in her place?

We see the examiner lady from the beginning of the episode again, but we still don't know who she is. What a mystery/tease!

They finally get to class after several more counts of sexual harassment, and we meet the three clubbers. They want Takurou to join their social club. For innocent reasons, I'm sure.

Okay, I guess not. They just want his body like everybody else. Does our MC ever get tired of being put on a pedestal?

Ooh, a call back to the beginning of the episode. More sexually inexperienced sexual assaulters.

It's revealed that the class teacher is the sponsor of the 'sex club' (I mean social club), so she won't interfere while her student is sexually assaulted right in front of her.

I suppose you could call this peer pressure. Or sex pressure. The club members reveal the president of the club is none other than Miss Drill Hair! How surprising! 

Disappointed that the MC wasn't dumb enough to show up at the social club, they discuss his penis. I do like the evil costume change, though, that's a nice touch.

Meanwhile, back at the ranch/dorm, we get some exposition and find out that Miss Drill Hair's sister, Reina, is the school principal. Now we know who the examiner at the beginning of the episode is. They're in cahoots!

Filthy stinking rich. Yup. Hot and rich.

The next day... he can't possibly be this dumb. Not after he blew off the social club the previous day.

It's not at all suspicious that the nurse is dressed in a fetish outfit or that she looks like one of the social club girls from yesterday, right? Right?

Yes, I'll totally kiss you and swallow your drugs. At this point he's either dumb as a rock or is curious as to what they want with him.

The answer is, of course, a sex dungeon. Yes, it's time for our MC to get raped multiple times. This should be pretty horrifying, but so far in this show the MC has shown no aversion towards what's happening to him. It's just a fantasy story. Just fantasy. Just Monika. I mean, fantasy.

The social club should really be called the baby making club. There's gonna be lots of "socializing" going on, for sure.

Is the event how many dildos sexy nurse lady can stuff in her ass? Sadly, it isn't.

We get a quick flashback and find out to our shock that the principal drugged Takurou so she could measure his cock. Talk about a medical entrance exam!

How could anyone say no to that?

Morimoto slave girls, training to be the very best they can be.

MC's father screwed up and became beholden to the Morimotos, which is why Takurou got sent to St. Arcadia in the first. place. Thanks, dad! Or... THANKS DAD!

As it turns out, all the students at the school are 'tributes' to the Morimoto group. Economic slaves attending a school wherein they learn to fuck their way to the top. Devilish!

Surprisingly, Mistress "Drill Hair" Leona isn't the first to sexually assault our MC. That duty falls to the kinky nurse.

He has no choice but to take it, but oddly, doesn't ever object to his treatment.

I love how all the rest of the girls help kinky nurse to get off. Some truly hot stuff.

Later on, the trials continue, and they chain up his dick so they can ride it longer.

Mistress "Drill Hair" still abstains from sexual shenanigans. Is she just edging herself?

After some more teasing, one of the social club members takes him to the hilt, while another sucks on his toes. Kinky!

Drained from his encounter with the succubi-like social club members, he's thrown out back onto campus (they don't explain how he got his clothing back).

Saori is not too bright. She's the only one who hasn't tried to sex up Takurou this whole time! How can she not know what's going on all around her? Is she asexual or something?

He needs to come back and join up with the social club so that Mistress can sample him too.

Completely clueless girl tries to get Takurou to join up with her club, but it seems unlikely that she'll be successful. How could she have been sent to this school and not know the lascivious activities going on there? It boggles the mind. Also, I think Takurou is secretly enjoying all the attention.

Verdict

A fairly trashy guy's fantasy, but there's plenty of things to like about this show: The bondage costumes, the games being played, and the sheer forwardness of the women all contribute to making this a fun romp.

Despite how 'cruel' they try to make Mistress Leona seem, she's not really all that mean beyond scheming how to make the MC obey and sex her all the time. Pretty much everybody else is trying to do the same thing, too, so she's not exactly worse than any of the other people in this universe!

She sure does like to make everybody else have sex. A lot.

One odd thing to remark upon is that there's no other guys shown at the school! I know for a fact that later episodes introduce some, but everyone in Takurou's class is a woman. There's some kind of hanky panky going on there.

This is one of the Hentais I really like, because the characters are not ridiculously cruel to each other. It's played more as a light-hearted bondage sex show, which surprisingly works.

I may review more of this another time if I run out of ideas.

Ranking: 9 Hentais out of 10.

It's Still Not Too Late: Weekly Update Edition

It's still the weekend, right? No? It's actually Monday now? Well, drat. But that doesn't mean it's too late! This can still happen!

It's been a busy week, spending time at an Anime con and dealing with Easter. As a result of going to the con, I spent more time watching Anime this weekend, since I've found more Anime series I want to watch as a result of spending most of a day discussing Anime with others. It's a lot of fun to spend time with true fans and bounce ideas off them.

Any, ahem, back to the smut.

Hot Pressed

Remember how I claimed I was done with the interstitial scenes last week? Well, I lied. But for a good cause.

You can never really know until you sit down to write a scene if that will be the last scene in that area because the action tends to develop into places you didn't think it would originally go. Our main character has now fallen off a cliff into a river, discovering new things about herself and her new companion in the process. Soon she'll be whisked away to the airship and end of story shenanigans will begin.

This is still my top priority story to get out, and I won't let myself work on anything else until it's finished, so here's hoping I can get the rest banged out sooner rather than later!

Robotic Restitution

Despite the general busyness, I have managed to edit another chapter last week. There's only six chapter left to do first pass editing on, and I know the last 4 chapters are a bit shorter (this week's chapter is longer than normal). That puts likely completion of the first pass at a month and a half... after which point the second pass will commence. The second pass should take less time theoretically because I'll only be reading for spelling and grammatical changes, and not for continuity.

I still need to come up with names for each novel, but the ideas are not yet flowing. I'll have to keep mulling ideas in my mind.

Omniscient

Yet another story idea has thrown itself at me (as they tend to do). Unknown when I'll ever get to this one, but I figure I'd post my vague outline notes so ya'll can see what an initial story outline looks like for me. Be aware this is pretty rough stuff and probably won't turn into a story that looks exactly like this (and I don't know when this story might ever see the light of day):

"Rosa ‘the wrench’ is sent on a salvage mission to rig up a ship for tractor lift with a small team of engineers. 

Other team members: Regina (Gina or Jina to her friends) is the lead, Brenda is a cranky Greasemonkey. 

As they are working, they are approached by an alien race that sports a single eye on the top of their head.

They are invited to a meal/meeting with the aliens, and are ordered to attend by their captain to find out if they know anything about the crash.

At the meeting, they are greeting with odd behavior by their hosts in that only one of them will speak to them at a time.

Before they know it, they are ambushed by their hosts - far more of them exist than they had known to begun with - and are captured.

They are attacked by alien eyes built into an octopus-like creature body. One of them mounts itself on top of Rosa's vagina and she is manipulated and gets to watch as more mount themselves on her teammate's heads.

She gets one on her head herself and is taken to a chamber and bound to a wall with secretions. She watches as her team members are violated by alien quadrupeds which pump them full of eggs. Her alien hat makes the situation more tolerable.

She then sees the alien hat on her teammate inject something into their heads and their faces go slack. It then proceeds to push itself down over her head like a sock.

This then happens to Rosa and she is subsumed within the hive mind which can then control her body like a puppet. 

She reports to the ship above that everything is fine and arranges for herself and her teammates to return. They pack their shuttle full to the brim with alien life. 

When they reach the ship, panic in the shuttle bay as all the infestation spills out into the ship. The captain attempts a quarantine, but the hive mind has engineering knowledge about the ship and overrides.

We get some juicy scenes from isolated quarters of the ship like engineering or sick bay as they are converted, finishing with the bridge. 

The ship is taken down to the planet and converted into a hive mind ship, ready to spread the infestation elsewhere. The only problem of course in the future will be military defenses from other civilizations. 

Could also have a final sex scene where former crew members acknowledge that the hive mind controls them forever."

Midweek MC: Variety Edition

I can't be bothered to review another Hentai right now (uh oh, is that the ennui creeping back in?). I did promise to do so eventually, but here on this blog smut promises are made to be broken (until I run out of other low effort material to post!)

Instead, this week I'll just run down some hot stuff that's been hanging out in my browser windows lately.

Super Robot Astraina - Wabuki

Mechas have never really been the kind of show I enjoy, but when you take the pilots and tie them up within their own mechas and brainwash them to serve the villain, then the real fun begins! I love how the MC looks like she's getting milked by the enslavement machine.

Stay till the very end of the comic to see what happens when your sidekicks get their robots transformed into bondage prisons as well. I do wonder what will happen once Earth's defense force is filled with mechas controlled by enslaved pilots...

Zoey! Watch Your Ass! - Ganassa

I played far more of Left4Dead and Left4Dead2 when they were released than I would like to admit, which makes me appreciate this adaptation all the more. Zoey was the best part of the Left4Dead franchise (let's not talk about Rochelle, she's unfortunately just not as good).

But what happens if Zoey doesn't escape? What if she's conquered and impregnated by the evil zombies?

Bill ends up on the short end of the stick in this one, but at least he goes out with a bang. I usually object to any sort of suggested death in my porn (because that's just not hot), but what happens to Zoey is freaking amazing. Recommended only if you don't mind Bill dying (which he does in the actual game anyway), and if you don't mind some pretty nasty looking zombies getting it on.

Watching Zoey make out with another girl while pregnant is some great art. :)

Alien Dickgirls from Space - Vitalis

And now for your regularly scheduled dose of Futa.

Serial recruitment has always been my jazz, and it's great when that recruitment involves body and mind transformations to make more of the invaders. Even better if there's impregnation to (eventually) create even more of them, but although there's plenty of fucking here, there's no pregnancy (can't have everything!)

The sausage nipples are a bit of a turn off, but they ARE aliens so I forgive the artist (somewhat).

Well, that's it for this week. I won't claim that I have the same amount of motivation every week, but I shall make an effort to keep this blog going, even when I don't feel like I have a lot to post!